Fates Door
by
Christopher Carlson
(Age: 26)
copyright 01-13-2005
Age Rating: 10 to 127
Knocking on fates door
Ratta tat tat
Will someone answer?
What does tomorrow hold?
Ratta tat tat
Will I be rich?
Or will I be poor?
Ratta tat tat
Will I love?
Or will I be alone?
Ratta tat tat
Will I live?
Or will I die?
Ratta tat tat
Questions like these I would like to know
But return tomorrow
To knock once more
Ratta tat tat
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"Ka, Sera, Sera, Whatever Will Be, Will Be", but we still ask the questions.
Good write; simple to understand; I like the repetition of the line "Ratta tat tat".
Hey Chris!! Welcome to PnP~!
I really like your poem. Keep writing with a start like this I think you could write a lot of cool things that I would enjoy!!
Stay at PnP for a while please we like what you have written! And we will enjoy the other work that you will write in the future!!
Bye!!
~!~Sarah~!~