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10-12-2005
Regina Pate
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10-12-2005
Regina Pate
I have read this again and I have found the flow, and I love it, I just had to slow down to find it. I read thing really fast, because I write really fast, so I can keep up with my brain. You are teaching me patience and I am learning how to take me time also, my time will come I am sure of that now, I just have to work with nature not against it. I know that now, love doesn't just happen it is a seed and it must bloom and it must spread before it dies, I knew the last part but I always have trouble with the first part. I don't like watching the grass grow but I love looking at the flowers bloom. Things happen in their own season, but I always remember to forever spread, A little love. You are teaching me a great deal and I do love you for that my dear Roger. Thank you. Great write, good job,
your Reina
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09-08-2005
Regina Pate
hmm... very interesting, I like the poem but it doesn't seem to be the style I am use to from you. A little interrupted flow a little shaky, doesn't quite makes sense, I wonder why a phase, a season, wheres the rainbow on your face smile my friend, smile!
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08-07-2005
Lauren Turner
I like this poem alot!
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