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You don't know me
by Angela Toshner (Age: 18)
copyright 01-17-2005

Age Rating: 13 to 127

You never really know me,
until you see life,
from my eyes.
All the ways lives hurt me.
All the ways I sometimes,
want to die.
If you've never seen judgement.
the way I do.
When laughter haunts me
and hides me away.
I write to express my feelings.
yet no one can figure out.
Why I am the way I am,
quite,
without a dought.
I push others away,
when they try to figure out.
Because I don't know who to trust.
I never really trust anyone,
in these younger years.
But instead I just hide away.
and prey
that I will br freed.

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03-13-2005 Lucy Suzume Q.

Wow, I totally feel the same way, and this poem is REALLY good, and full of expression!!!!! I like it!!!!!!

01-21-2005 Sarah Taylor

I have been a member only a couple of days now and I am shocked at the talent these Jr. Authors have. I see that you are 15 and a good writer I hope your talent is recognized by your biggest critique...you!
Thanks, Sarah

01-18-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut

You can be quiet if you want, but it seems to me that you have a lot to say that others want to read! Dispare is nothing good or new. Poets have been writing about it for ever. Most people don't know what its like to create something, you on the other hand seem to know very well how that is done. You are a valuble person and we are listening to you. Thanks, Anthony

01-17-2005 SamiJo Mcquiston

I feel this way so often.
Your wording is wonderful, just two suggestions:
1."All the ways lives hurt me." I would make lives, life.
2."that I will br freed" br is be.
Keep up the good work.

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You don't know me by Angela Toshner (Age: 18) copyright 01-17-2005 Age Rating: 13 to 127

You don't know me
by Angela Toshner (Age: 18)
copyright 01-17-2005

Age Rating: 13 to 127