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I thought you were......

by Paula Tsvayg (Age: 24)
copyright 01-21-2005

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I thought you were my friend
You weren't
I thought you cared for me
You didn't
I thought you were my love
You weren't
I thought I was your love
I wasn't
I thought that you were honest
You weren't
I thought you were the one
Yeah, right
I thought that I could trust you
I shouldn't have
And I did
What can I say?
It's over.

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        06-23-2005     Paul Kangas        

Life can be so incredibly hard sometimes. Everyone loses a friend one time or another, but you've gotta stay strong and realize that you've got great true friends who will always be there for you. Great write.

        02-19-2005     Delaney Lindley        

Sometimes in life you start to make changes and reconsider, looking from every angle and occasionally you find the thing you thought you once enjoyed, weren't what you thought they were to begin with. Good write.

        01-24-2005     Sarah Taylor        

I loved reading this... sounds great! It sounds like something I would've written... Thanks, Sarah

        01-22-2005     SamiJo Mcquiston        

Wow, this has so much true emotion.
It horrible to realize you've been decieved by someone you love, isn't it.
Keep up the good work.

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