Daydreams Of A Drifter
by
Anthony Lane Stahlhut
(Age: 47)
copyright 01-23-2005
Age Rating: 4 to 127
Dreams of times when thoughts were few,
now there is little or nothing to do.
When days went by without a glance.
Trying to stop them like you had a chance.
When everyone was there and you could talk,
now no one cares, so you just walk and walk.
It seems people change everyday,
how do you stop it, show me the way.
The answer is hard and I must rest,
could I do more, or have I done my best?
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So sweet. We all try our very best. Sometimes it never seems to be enough, but all in all it is all we can do to survive in this wold, day and age. This is life. We walk we talk and most of all we all are drifters.
Keep up the great work Anthony.
This is a very fine first effort. Your rhyming scheme is good, your story line appears well thought out and thought provoking. Ther is a good flow to your work. If I had any suggestions it would be to try to put more emotion into your work. Let it be as much from the heart as it is from the mind. This can morph a good poem to a great one.
Although it seems romantic to be a drifter, most people need to know that someone needs them to be around. We all need responsibilities and interaction with others.
Well done; especially for your first try.