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The Other Girl's Shadow
by Katie Langolf (Age: 22)
copyright 02-03-2005


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
What is the matter?
What’s happening to me?
Why is their chatter
So troubling to me?
She broke his heart
That’s sad, but true.
She’s sorry from the start
And admits to it too.
He doesn’t trust that girl
But his heart will mend
He’s afraid to trust any girl
As more than a friend.
Though it is not so easy to tell
I am also in love with him as well.


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01-24-2006 Richard Reed Jr    

This is very well-written. Nice rhymes good rhythm. Very romantic theme. I loved the last line.


Rich
10-16-2005 Mike Macdonald    

This is one of the sweetest poems I've read on this site. Most writers your age don't do nearly this well.
09-17-2005 SamiJo Mcquiston    

I can relate to this. It's so hard, isn't it? The rhyme scheme wored really well, wording perfection. However in the last line, "I am also in love with him as well." I would take out "also" as it means the same as "as-well" and I just think it rolls off the toungue a little wierd. Keep up the good work.

SamiJo



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