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Severed & Broken But the Spark Still Tries
by Sammy A. (Age: 17)
copyright 01-26-2005

Age Rating: 10 to 127

She kneels by herself in the lonely raining street,
supported now only an iron bar
That is what it seems, at least
She has the will to go on, to make the best of it
She is on her own, but she doesn't need anyone
Happiness is a choice; her OWN choice
THEY can make her life happier, but it is their choice for associating with her
Not her fault if they are emotionally damaged,
for she is broken
You would be too
if you were the only person you could rely on

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12-02-2005 Haley R.

Wow! This one is kind of depressing, but it's really good. It made me think, but after a while I agree, it's true, people can choose happiness, just I don't understand how someone could choose against it...

Awsome Poem! Keep up the great work!!!

~haley

11-12-2005 Mehrina B.

*sob* That's my life. Nobody in my life supports me. I'm all alone. People demand stuff from me but they never encourage me or support me. It's some feeling. I depend on solely myself. I love this poem. It's really great. The title's a phenomenon all to itself.

Simply mezmerizing and true. Bravo.

04-12-2005 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball

You are SO right! Happiness IS a choice! No matter what... don't ever forget that. I grew up on the streets of Chicago, and well... you just have to choose happiness or else there aren't many other pleasant options. :-)

03-20-2005 David Pekrul

It is sad to see someone living on the streets. How did they get there? Have they ever tried to get off the street? Is there anyone there to help?
You have painted quite a picture.

David Pekrul

01-30-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut

Great insight for someone so young. Great Job! Thanks, Anthony

01-28-2005 Sarah Taylor

very good I can imagine what the narrator is feeling... Thanks, Sarah

01-27-2005 SamiJo Mcquiston

I'm mostly an angst writer so I love this sort of stuff. And You've done such a great job writeing it. This is a truly amazing piece.
Keep up the good work!

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Severed & Broken But the Spark Still Tries by Sammy A. (Age: 17) copyright 01-26-2005 Age Rating: 10 to 127

Severed & Broken But the Spark Still Tries
by Sammy A. (Age: 17)
copyright 01-26-2005

Age Rating: 10 to 127