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The Other Girl's Lie (the sequal to The Other Girl's Shadow)
by Katie Langolf (Age: 22)
copyright 02-04-2005


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
Cheetahs can't change their spots.
Zebras can't change their stripes
A person who doesn't learn from History
Repeats it over and over twice more.
She said she was sorry
but it turns out she's not.
She's done the exact same thing
She should be sorry for.
What can you say
in response to all this?
Some people won't learn
Until that very thing
happens to them.
Then they feel sorry
and wish to come back.
What do you say after
all they've done.
"Too bad, So sad,
Get outta here
You're done."


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01-24-2006 Richard Reed Jr    

I see you as having a wise and realistic view of the world that's philosophical beyond your years.
The poem was well-written and a very vivid expression of your emotions.

Rich
02-05-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

You write with much anger and your thoughts are strong. Thanks, Anthony
02-05-2005 David Pekrul    

It sounds harsh, but Debra is right. Although it can be theraputic to express your thoughts in writing, which you have done, and done well.

Regards,
David Pekrul
02-04-2005 Debra Rose    

"It happened. Learn from your mistakes, suck it up, and move on. Life can't be lived in the past, and the past can live in your life."

Those are the words of a very good friend of mine one time when I was upset over something that happened years and years ago...the wisest things...

Other people may not learn...we can't even hope they do. Only we can.

Wonderful work, Katie. I enjoyed this.
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