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Question Of Thoughts
by Walter Jones (Age: 63)
copyright 09-06-2007


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
With malice and love
Does any one care

Stood, in permanent position looking for the sun.

Childhood sweet heart
Cuts him to the core

Flood a passing thought in reader slip each will run.

Tried to see angels
Shorn of pride

Gold takes the place of dreamers in the sad of fun.

From mothers womb
Grown in the wisdom

Rolled down the check of love in the bottom it is done.

Rejection born of her
A lasting memory

Shore as far as the eye can see ocean is me with one.

Tentative reach for no
Burned again by love

Fold in sand and eyes at sleep we dance in the brazen sun.

Body and soul left
Weak needing help

Store in the book of little direction a place sleep to run.

Elegant grace sleep
Dance in only heart

Oar of life lingers just a bit in the shell left by children at fun.

Fingers sleep alone
Critical of words

Perfect the words in glory seen all lay to find a word done.

Love found in script
And page mark to fold

Silver body laid to tan graced a silent heart child now is one.


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09-07-2007 Marilyn Mackenzie    

I read and re-read this and am still confused. It sounds a bit like it's about death. Or maybe about the life of a child from infancy to age one. I'm not sure at all.

Meanwhile...anyone should be one word. So should sweatheart.
09-06-2007 Samantha P.    

wow this was very deep, and yet so hard to understand. you make the writer think a lot which is very hard for someone ho just got lectured all day.
However after reading it a few times isort of got the grasp. Love can be a malace, espeically when things dont go right.
I couldnt tell if you meant some of the grammar issues, liek Oar and such, and tet this was marvelous
and yet still very confusing
hope u understand that
Antha
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