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Threshold
by James Shammas (Age: 44)
copyright 03-28-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Stuck on a dry hinge,
the creaking door is opened
to the world outside.




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05-08-2005 Jean George    

This one catches my attention and brings my sense of curiosity into play...Why is the hinge dry? Was the door locked to those inside and the key lost? Have there been no opportunities to open the door or no desire to? Was fear of the other side, laziness or sheer complacency involved? What prompted the opening of the door now and not before? Has the door been waiting for the 'right' someone to appear or did someone from the outside force the door open to free those inside and why?....Yes I'd say that this one provided me with ample opportunity to exercise my curiosity and expand my horizons much like a creaky door opening to the outside.
03-28-2005 David Pekrul    

The imagery is great. One suggestion, however, wouldn't it make more sense to say 'creaking door' rather than 'rattling door', you know, to go along with 'dry hinge'. (just a suggestion)
03-28-2005 Jack Curson    

Excellent Hiaku! Great write, your words let the imagination soar.
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