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by James Shammas (Age: 48)
copyright 02-10-2005


Age Rating: 7 +

When you touch me,
I'm set off like a top,
pulled by a string,

spinning and spinning,
so fast I can't stop,
round and round
yet
straight as an
arrow,
balancing hard on
one toe,
grinning and spinning
with the illusion I'm still,

Until I
wobble and bobble,
you watching me grovel,
cheering and sneering
until I
stumble and hobble,

topple and fall.






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        05-01-2007     Richard Reed Jr        

Jim,

Sounds a bit like the agony and ecstasy of a love relationship to me. Simple but exquisite.

The idea was good, the images were good, and the words were good.

Good work my friend,

Rich

        05-16-2005     Anthony Lane Stahlhut        

Is this a pick up line? Just kidding! Anthony



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