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Greed Not Forgotten
by Angela Toshner (Age: 19)
copyright 02-10-2005


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
I know your somewhere,
out their.
Waiting to hold my hand.
Show yourself.
Help me,
To battle
this foolish land.
of this, this world,
has come to.
Of bombs, greed and pain.
We take to much advantage,
of the things,
That we gain.
No one will trust
This USA
Of that I do not blame.
We are out to be the best.
Of that we already are.
And yet we laugh
and forget.
Of who,
We really are.
What light has perceived,
has come.
And we are out for greed.
Making all a contest,
even the amount of money,
we send.
To help those in need.
So try growing up,
"United we stand."
and get over your greed.
That is ruining this land.


This is in no way intended for the entire U.S.A. It is only for those people that want what everyone else has and are never satisfied with what god has already provided for them. L-I-F-E




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02-25-2005 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

your ... in the first line should be "you're"
to much advantage... should be "too"
percived... ? perceived?
Final advice... there are parts that are a bit choppy. With some work, this has a lot of potential. Keep it up.

The thoughts in your poem are very reflective and your honesty is refreshing. I once wrote something also advising the USA to look at the world as a UNITED place and not just the United States. (In my poem God Bless The World, Not Just The USA - http://www.prose-n-poetry.com/display_work/1620)

Oh, and I also entered this contest. I'd love to know what you think of my poem.

Thank you again for sharing this. :-)
02-12-2005 David Pekrul    

This is a very deep poem, with great moral ideas and thoughts. Well done.
There are, however, numerous spelling errors. They tend to take my mind off the subject; if they were corrected the poem would be perfect.

David Pekrul
02-11-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

Unfortunately everything comes back to money. You are a wise young lady.This poem states a very true fact. Great job, Anthony
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