06-26-2010
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
This was a very nicely written poem with a sweet sentiment. It's nice to see you were able to make so much out of an English assignment! Good work; my only suggestion is that you might and to glance over the grammar sometime, since there are a few places that could use commas or spaces.
~Leigh of the Commenting Community
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11-27-2007
Lauren Turner
I thought it would be a little angsty, but I was wrong. It was very sweet and charming. A story about a love for a puppy? Awwww. I love it.
I can't see any mistakes in it, you did a great job. =D If I have a prompt, it normally comes out like crap. xD
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07-16-2007
Emily Garwood
I add to the list of reminders...reminds me of Luna who jumped after a car and rusty who just died of old age i love them both so much and its so unfair when they go the wrong way good poem and a good tribute to the one you love keep it up. the only thing i see wrong was the word balloons you spelt it wrong but most probably a type happens to me all the time with those damn double letters and stuff lol keep it up
Emy
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07-19-2006
Kimberly Murphy
Aww. Reminded me of Poohjay. Very good write!! Excellent write I should have said. I love it!!
Kim
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07-17-2006
Richard Reed Jr
Your poems light up my life.
This one reminded me fondly of my dog Pepper (see "Pepper" in my book "Echoing Footprints).
I loved that fuzzy black cocker spaniel as dearly as I could love anything and anybody.
Thanks for reminding me of her.
Most fondly,
Rich
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04-25-2006
Vicki Grinrod
Yeah, Anglea, Love is great. But of course, it is only a surge of this drug called pheny- something in the brain. Eventually we come to tolerate it, like all drugs. Know what book that info is from?
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03-29-2006
Angela Toshner
this is really good....hmm I love love!
angela
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10-10-2005
Regina Pate
I love the way you seem "to" smile
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10-10-2005
Regina Pate
very sweet and so true, my cat just had kitten and they keep running into the street and getting killed so I had to take the rest to the SPCA, anyway, I still have my cat though and I yell at her all the time to stay out of the road, she is half wild and I can't make her, I will be sad when she dies, however she dies but I don't want to have to scrape her off the side of the road like I did her babies, I think she smells them it is really sad, but that is life and it will go on great write one typo
Gina
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09-05-2005
Eleni Makarios
Really good! I kept expecting it to say "Let me count the ways"... :-)
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05-24-2005
Kristy Ahn
It's a very nice and sweet of a poem. I think you did quite a good job on it. Believe it or I too had to write a sonnet for hw as an english assignment. I hope you can visit and read mine as well
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05-22-2005
Tori Lang
A bitter sweet poem of the saddness one feels when they lose a beloved pet.I will never forget experiencing that as a child.
You have described your late pup and honoured his memory with such niceness.
Thankyou
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05-16-2005
Shannon Walter
wow that was some poem showing that you love a person for who he is what he does that is deep and i love it it is so amazing that people like you can express them selves by peotry. peots like you enspire me. people like you are what keeps me trying to write poems and try to get better.
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04-26-2005
hedwig
Well, you better have gotten an A! hehe.
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