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Beautiful poem! Forgive my old comment..it was before my days as a Commenting Crusader, now it sickens me to see a one line comment with my name above it. This is a beautiful poem, and tells a story we all know well, but do not always chose to tell. The flow is wonderful ,and the picture is also a nice touch. I can tell you truly care about your friends, and I hope you'll all be together again someday soon. Error alert: lonelyness = loneliness, you should capitalize each line, and add a few commas. Only minor errors we all make. You've left your mark on PnP, and though I've never seen you in reality I hope you can think of me as a friend.
JAAAAAAAAANE!!!!!!!!!!!
I really miss you. I promise I won't forget you, and if you really need to talk, I'm an email away!
Only thing... "Lonlyness" is "lonliness"
I won't ever forget you, so don't you ever forget me, 'kay?
Yes...lovely and deep...an excellent poem!I also like the style of writing the poem as well...and your 11?!Awsome stuff here and I can't wait to read more!
This is a pretty deep poem, not only for an 11 year old, but for anyone. As you get older and have more life experiences, your poetry can only get better and better.
Welcome !
