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My Dearest Friend
by
Jane L.
(Age: 14)
copyright 02-24-2005
Age Rating: 7 to 127
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Your voice is,
More beautiful,
Than the lovely song of a canary.
Your scent,
Reminds me,
Of the wonderful scent of a rose.
Our times together,
Can make me,
Smile, laugh, or cry.
But that's only my memory of you.
The details that I know and remember,
Are slipping away from me...
Faster than the speed of light.
As hard as I can,
I try to cling onto,
The remaining memories of you.
My memory of you,
May not be accurate.
You might have changed.
So much that,
I might not know who you are.
Will we ever meet again?
Would I get another chance,
To just see your face?
Day and night,
I pray with all my strength.
Just so we can meet again.
My hope...
My dream...
My prayer...
Is to see you once more.
May we meet again,
My dearest friend.
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11-06-2006 Leigh G.
Ahhh, another beautiful land flowing poem to your friends. I don't get board with your work...usually poems about friendship/love get my board after awhile. My only grammar and spelling advice (my now you most likely think it's not advice...XD) is the caps and commas. I did find one typo though, in the fourth paragraph you mean "that's" not "thats". Simple title, no big deal. Good work, keep writing! I'm off to your next poem! So...have I annoyed you with how long it's taking to read all these comments? :D Beautiful piece, keep writing!
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders!
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08-26-2006 Euna P.
I miss you Jane. I can really read and feel your emotions in this poem.
Don't worry if the memories become less than accurate. We can always make new ones, and the old ones can be put away in that little golden box in your mind, treasured forever.
^.^
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04-06-2005 Caitlin M.
This is so sweet. I love the beginning, at first I was thinking wow I hope she writes a poem about me! Hehe losing friends really is a bummer. Don't suck it up, it's okay to cry.
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03-22-2005 Lucy Suzume Q.
*Clap clap clap* This poem has a lot of emotion in it, I like it!!!!!! Good job!
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03-19-2005 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
It's hard when you can't be with someone special in your life. I've found that writing everything down that I can remember as I think of it, every little memory, every little quip... helps me remember the moments longer. I once read a poem by an unknown author and have never been able to erase it from my mind...
Friend of mine, I think of you
at least once every day
I wonder what you're doing
and if I can help in any way
The miles have crept between us
and are trying to keep us apart
They'll never succeed in doing that
you're always in my heart!
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02-26-2005 Sage B.
I know how you feel when you haven't seen someone for along time memories tend to disappear. This was a great poem keep writting!
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02-26-2005 Alara Benavides
Your poem is very good, keep up the good work.
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02-24-2005 Crystal (bunny) Johnson
this was a good poem. don't know why a lot of people or at lease some people haven't comment yet. good luck with writting!
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02-24-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut
I hope you get bored a lot. Not really, but if it makes you write then it isn't all bad. This is a good thought and you have described it well. Your friend should be very happy if they ever read this. Thanks, Anthony
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02-24-2005 Jane L.
Donno what made me write this. I was just bored.
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