08-30-2005 Leigh G.
This is cute. It's a good start. You are going to be a good writer one day. I'm not gunna ask you to cheak some of my poems because most of'em are to old for you. But you should do your one stuff not, some one eles. Cute poem all the same.
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05-16-2005 Tina Z.
You should use this as a Valentine's Day poem! It's really nice. Write on!
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    03-22-2005 Eugenia Buskova
That is so cute! Keep the good work Esther!
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03-19-2005 Esther T.
thank you for commenting
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03-11-2005 David Pekrul
You just keep writing little gal; you're going to be a great poet one day.
David Pekrul
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   03-09-2005 Sarah Mahler
Aww. That's really sweet. I like the way you took an old poem and turned it into a new one.
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    03-07-2005 Irina Guschina
You make me smile Esther! So nice to see you here! Keep writing! I am waiting.... Irina.
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  03-05-2005 Caitlin M.
Wow your only six?! Hehe this reminds me of when I was new everyone was amazed by how young I was. Anyways, this is so cuuuute ooooooo I just want to hug you! Okay I'll stop.
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