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by Sage Bruce
copyright 02-27-2005

Age Rating: 10 +

There we were running
Courtney,Carly,You and I
Running the wind just blowing
The laughter escaped our mouths like the drops of rain escaping the clouds
We could hear the music that never was
The lost chord,
Our hearts beating
Our blood flowing
All in harmony the moment was perfect

Then we arrived at our destination
The pool
It was closed but we snuck in
I jumped in abandoning all reasonable thought
You said I was daring and rebellious
You said you wished you could be like me
We were all wet
We had to get dry
We ran as fast as we could
We found this little jungle gym
And I found a picture perfect view
Then Courtney took pictures of me and you
That was Sunday and I think of it now
Even though I'm not you as I wish I could be
Even though your not me
I think we both were one
Our souls in harmony
And even though I'm not perfect
At that split moment I didn't care
I felt beautiful with just you there
I wish I could tell you how I really feel
But I'm not so out going I fear
If you get to read this
If I get brave
I want you to know that I care about you
I worry about you
I'm so glad I met you
I'm just so glad you're here
I want you to never disappear
I want to relive that instant again and again
I want you to be more than just a friend
I have never felt such a way before
You drive me to be me and you fill me with cheer
All in all I wish you were here

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        11-15-2005     Sage Bruce        

umm...this is for my friend angie...

        04-11-2005     David Pekrul        

This is a wonderful expose of innocence and love. It makes one dream of years past, when they were young and love was strong, pure and innocent.

You have great talent.
Keep writing,
David Pekrul

        03-01-2005     Madeline Cruz        

I love how there is a definet mood change through out the poem!!!I can't wait to read more!

        02-28-2005     usprincess123        

I think this is a wonderful poem. It's very cheerful in the beginning and then it turns more serious and emotional, I like that in an author, when they can set the mood. I enjoyed it very much!

        02-28-2005     Anthony Lane Stahlhut        

Love is a wonderful thing and when you find the right one, you never want to be without them again. Great write and thanks, Anthony

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