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06-26-2005
Roger Crique
The word, "that," in the beginning of the second stanza stops the flow of this poem. But allow me to say that this is one of the most beautiful, thoughtful, methodical, elegantly narrated poems that I've read in a very long time. Your mastery of imagery is outstanding! The words used to enrich this piece of work is tantalizing to the senses. This is an oil painting of nature and the brush strokes are your words! Masterfully done!
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05-01-2005
Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
As Paula said, I too feel this is very deep (and I agree with James in that your word choices are exquisite!). This is one of those rare poems that though my son may not have understood every word,he understands the feeling and can see the pictures none the less. And though he saw only "winter" in your poem while I read into it my own feelings of life and love and innocence, I feel it's age appropriate for nearly every age. :-)
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03-18-2005
Emily Garwood
Never looked at winter like that, i looked at it as a turn up the heater and sit close to keep warm. Lovely poem with a great use of words too, i enjoyed the read!!!!
Emy
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03-08-2005
James Shammas
Your choice of words and their relationships in the line are exquisite and very rich! Just gorgeous to read!
Jim
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03-05-2005
David Pekrul
You make winter sound so nice. My personal opinion of it is rather the opposite of how you feel (see my poem "Ice Blues".) This really is pretty, though. Sounds like a postcard.
David Pekrul
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03-05-2005
Paula Tsvayg
Even though his poem is really a nature's kiss, the way you described the setting and her feelings are amazing.
I can't grasp the meaning of 'deep poetry', but in my opinion, this is deep poetry if there is any.
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