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Lilith's Elegy
by Mike Macdonald (Age: 27)
copyright 07-10-2005


Age Rating: 16 to 127

 
Here I sit, contemplating
The raw deal I was given
In the Garden of Eden
When I was shunned because I was
Independent.

“I’ll not be your concubine!”
I said to that bastard, Adam,
That conceited chauvinist
Who saw me as nothing more than
His manhood’s sheath.

So, wings spread, away I flew,
Seeking better companionship.
And the poor bastard was sad
His toy had up and left him
All alone.

God pitied his son, and sent
Three angels to bring me back.
But Adam added to their task,
Behind his holy father’s back,
A contract.

I’d joined a society
Of demons seeking affection,
Countless infamous beings,
Lucifer, Lamia, and Set
To name a few.

The three angels soon found me
And attacked while I sunbathed,
Threatening to drown me if
I refused to return to my
Conniving husband.

Despite popular belief,
I truly adore children,
The most innocent form of life.
I find nothing more beautiful
In this world.

And these three angels agreed
To let me live in misery
If I never came in contact
With another child again,
My own or not.

As if that curse was not enough,
I was also to allow
One hundred of my flesh and blood
To die every single day,
Forever.

With streaming eyes, I agreed
To never see or keep a child,
And they left me with my life,
But took my heart with them in pieces
Back to Adam.

Adam got a hot new wife,
A degrading substitute for
The position I once filled,
A ditz made from Adam’s own rib.
I hope it hurt.

I’m currently a symbol
For feminists and Jewish wives
To adore as an icon
Of feminine independence
And divinity.

Just the kicker-upper I need,
To be a divine role model
For arrogant, sexist pigs
Who blame all men for their own
Poor tastes in mates.

I’m sure God still loves me, since
He learned what Adam did to me.
Now three angels are fallen,
Adam and Eve burning deep in
Tartarus,

And my offspring bear no curse,
Though God’s limited my supply
As demons tend to cause trouble.
I try to act understanding.
He knows best.

So I sit here, as the years roll by,
Warring with my fellow demonesses,
Enduring the scorn of the holy,
Receiving male-haters’ idiotic praise,
And crying.


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11-06-2006 Neb Tanner    

I love this poem! As if Lilith were saying it herself with all that attitude. I also love how it doesn't portray her as not evil. Really makes it stand out ^_^


03-22-2006 Tabitha Beaudin    

I must confess i didnt' know who Litith was until i watched Neon Genisis Evagelion...then afterwards i researched her like crazy. What i love about this poem is that you caputure the essence of her so completley and you also don't' paint her as just evil like so many other poems did. Amazing write this is one of the best things i've ever read and you have inspired me. Mike you are now my Muse.mawhaaaaaaaaaa..


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