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^House Noises^
by Lisa Anderson (Age: 18)
copyright 03-14-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Little house noises give me fright.
Is there someone in my house tonight?

All alone I shake and shiver,
At each sound my lip does quiver!

I sit and watch the big white door,
The noises are simply not sounds anymore!

With the creek of the floor he walks on in,
A ghoulish folk with a big wide grin!

He pulls out his blade and gives it a lick
As he slowly remarks, "Let's make this quick."

My pen does fall to the blood red ground
Where I lie dead,
Not making a sound.


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01-24-2006 Richard Reed Jr    

Your usual nice smooth read with good rhyme and rhythm and a great surprise ending.
You are really amazing.

Rich
06-04-2005 Angela Toshner    

Lisa I actually agree with you here cause ur house is freaky and yes haunted. so I mean to sit in your house and not kno what is in it is normal in my eyes. lol
03-19-2005 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

I remember the first time my eldest son was left home alone for an hour or two when he was nine or ten... he was so frightened by the little noises a house can make that he never paid attention to when we were there... like he assumed everything was OK when Mom and Dad were there.

I also remember my husband telling me about once when he was home alone and how afraid he was of the noises coming from the furnace in the basement.

Funny, I can't ever remember being afraid or being alone. I guess it's because I was the oldest of five children and even when my mother was not there... I wasn't alone. I can't remember being completely and utterly ALONE until I went away to college. I'll tell you, there's nothing like peace and quiet!!!
03-19-2005 James Shammas    

I like the end, too. Very clever!
03-16-2005 Lucy Suzume Q.    

Wow! I totally did NOT expect that ending to happen!!!!!!! That's a good surprise, I really liked this poem!
03-15-2005 David Pekrul    

Have you been watching too many teen horror movies? lol
This is kind of creepy, but good.

David Pekrul
03-15-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

This is so dark and the end is not what I had expected. This is rather spooky and the next time I'm home alone the noises will most likely be Louder! Thanks, Anthony
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