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Your Smile
by
Jane L.
(Age: 14)
copyright 03-18-2005
Age Rating: 1 to 127
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The power of smile...
Please give me new strength.
To you I will give my bursting smile.
I want to give you new strength.
Someone out there needs you.
Now open your eyes.
Without any reason gathering,
Without knowing the end gathering smile.
Come and join us.
It's the power of smile.
The power of love,
The power of me.
The power of smile.
The power of love,
The power of you.
I have a happy face,
Because I am spending my time with you.
Look at my bright smile!
It gives everyone strength.
Please give me new strength.
I want to give you my bursting smile,
Now open your eyes.
Without any reason gathering,
Without knowing the end gathering smile.
Come and join us.
The power of smile,
The power of love,
The power of me.
The power of smile,
The power of love,
The power of you.
Please show me your smile.
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11-06-2006 Leigh G.
This is a nice little poem! The picture is very fitting! Yes! Each line starts with a capital! There's a few places where you could use commas, but the caps are wonderfully professional to see... It's true too, a smile will almost always make another person as mile, and improve both our moods. Friends, family, and others are the types of people who make us smile, and I hope I fall into that friends category!
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders!
(I think this is the first time Haley called herself a "Commenting Crusader" and not a "Comment Crusader"! She didn't like the "ing"...why? Ask Haley!) :)
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08-08-2006 Haley R.
This is a sweet poem! A smile can do nearly anything for a person.
I like the last line:
"Please show me your smile"
I think it's such a sweet innocent line.
Nice Job!
~haley the commenting crusader.
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04-06-2005 Caitlin M.
This is really happy, but could use more than just "strenghth" to explain it.
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04-02-2005 Katie M.
Pretty song; the lyrics are very uplifting. Almost make me want to go out and eat some icecream in the park. XD
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03-24-2005 Sarah Mahler
Lovely song. I love the idea of the power of smiling. I certainly believe in it. Keep it up.
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03-22-2005 Eugenia Buskova
Sounds like a song to me, great work
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03-21-2005 Gregory Christiano
A smile is a poerful emotion, and one in which is expressed so well in your poem.
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03-21-2005 James Shammas
This certainly made me smile! I notice, though, that many poets do not use any punctuation at all and I'm wondering whether this is a fad. I think it works for some poems but, for me, it depends on the subject matter and how one wants to convey its message.
Nice job overall.
Jim
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03-20-2005 Doreen Reynolds
To smile is like offering a gift. I smile at everyone and sometimes people smile back especially old people who do not see many people. Those who who not reciprocate make me want to laugh they must be so unhappy. The world needs smiles.
Doreen
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03-19-2005 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
Smiles and hugs, the more you give the more you get. Isn't it nice how that works?
And I'm glad to come back for a bit and read some of your work. :-)
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03-18-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut
You are really very smart. You write very well and in two languages. This poem or song (which I can hear the melody) has a good message and it is a great Idea for a song. Thanks, Anthony
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03-18-2005 Jane L.
I made this poem orginally in Korean but I thought it might be good in English. Now that I made the poem it doesn't seem that way. Its really suppose to be a song.
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