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The High School Years
by James Shammas (Age: 44)
copyright 03-21-2005


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
Every birthday, she asked if I was happy she birthed me,
the miracle three pound "premee" who looked like a chicken,
the quiet wiz-kid who groped for answers
beginning with those heavy encyclopedia books
bending the tops of the dusty wood shelves built just for us.
At fourteen, she would grope me with a smile,
looking for hair in private places that made me her man,
so amusing when performed on "Baby Boy A," identical twin Dan.
Thereafter, I gave her valentines as young sons should,
speeding down high school hallways, freezing in front of
short skirts and fallen bra straps,
recalling Dad's only admonition to wear a condom on Saturday nights.
And at the top of my class, I toasted them both:
The thawing tears and slugged down cheers,
promising Dad that trip to Bimini when I made my first million
until he faded with an intoxicated wind,
his heart stopping one day, Mom's going strong
until I stopped sending valentines.
And so when she asked me with a sultry flair,
would I throw roses on her grave,
I replied with a white, frozen smile,
"If I could only reach past this chunk of dirt,
since it seems I who lie under clay and earth."




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04-13-2005 Jeniffer Brand    

Wow, a very emotional write. I got a lot of anger and frustration along with sadness out of that. I'm sorry. That wanted to make me cry. But you came out on top! Thats what matters. Right?


03-22-2005 James Shammas    

The last sentence is purely a symbolic metaphor for the spiritual death (or 'unbirth') the boy feels in an emotionally abusive and stifling relationship with his parents. Does the poem not convey this or should I be more literal in conveying this feeling?

Jim


03-22-2005 David Pekrul    

I agree, this is a little confusing. I'm sure you understand where you are going with this, but perhaps it could be reworded or somehow clarified to let the rest of us in. I will check back for updates, as I feel this has great potential..

David Pekrul


03-22-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

I keep rereading this to see if I missed something. I am following the story untill the last line throws me. If he is under the dirt, who is toasting his parents? Is it that he stoped sending Valentines because he passed? Your story here is wonderful and the way you wrote it seems great too, except if the boy is no longer with his mom I think you should bring that out more so the reader isn't confused. What happened to "Baby Boy A"? The first part is so informative then the bombshell and its over. I want more, but thats only my opinion. I enjoyed the read. Thanks, Anthony


03-21-2005 Jack Curson    

I liked the write until the end. I will read it again, but it seems open ended to me.


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