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The Asylum
by David Pekrul
copyright 03-24-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

  The Asylum
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Rules, rules, rules,
Everywhere I look,
Can't ever do the things I want,
"Just do it by the book."

They say that I'm not capable
Of thinking on my own,
And so I live in here right now,
I am no longer home.

I cannot live the way I choose,
I do as I am told,
I'll live my life on others terms
Until the day I'm old.

I didn't mean to end up here,
It was a big mistake,
They say that I went crazy
When a man's life I did take.

So now I sit inside these walls
And listen to the voices.
I'll stay in here until I die,
Because of my poor choices.


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03-25-2005 Sage B.    

I've been there before.. couldn't find a baby sitter..lol..good poem short and sweet..
03-25-2005 Doreen Reynolds    

I used to visit an asylum on a Sunday lots of people all sitting round hopeless. Three good meals a day and a walk around the grounds which were beautiful. Notices on the wall to say what day it was. Old men jumping out naked. It is now changed they have more freedom and the drugs are better.

Doreen
03-24-2005 Sammy A.    

It's kind of creepy. But I like it! There are consenquences for all of your actions. Good write.
03-24-2005 David Pekrul    

Yep, Anthony, just another overdose of caffine and an overactive imagination.

David Pekrul
03-24-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

I hope this was an attempt to expand your subjects and not a real life experence. This is a sad, but well written poem and I enjoyed the read, Anthony
03-24-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

I hope this is another attempt to expand your subjects and not a real life experence. Although I proubly would fit there, you seem to level headed for that. This is a well written, sad story. I enjoyed the read, Anthony
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