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This reminds me (fondly) of high school days. So many of us were afraid of rejection, so we didn't take that chance. How many of us may have lost our one stab at the one true love. I know now that I didn't miss that, since I'm married to him now. But I wonder if I missed an opportunity to know a really good person.
Very nice! The flow keeps moving, and it's very fitting to my contest, "So Much Left Unspoken." Sorry for not commenting sooner, my life has been...hectic. This is a very good poem! I can't find any typos, or spelling and grammar mistakes. I'm usually not much for the rhyming, but it wasn't overkill in this one and made it keep moving. It's so nice to read a poem that I don't need to say, "You need to capitalize the first letter of the title, and the first word of each line." Only problem with newbies, ya know? You sound a lot like a certain guy I know... I'd say who, but he'd most likely pop a bubble if he know he was this whiny at times. ;) Thank you for entering my contest, and I hope to see many more great pieces like this one! Keep writing!
Leigh still managing to stay a Commenting Crusader
Thanks Mary,
I changed the line to read "Oh Lord, what is wrong with me?" I changed the punctuation slightly; I think it reads better now.
Thanks again,
David
You KNOW I love your work, and this cute one is no exception. However, I would look twice at this line...
Oh, Lord, just what is wrong with me?
Because you use the word "just" in a few lines afterward, you could easily take it out of this one. Besides, this line sticks out as it is longer the rest and omitting that "just" would shorten it perfectly. You can even make "what is" into "what's" and it would sound more "natural".
Then again, that's just imho... I like it and am glad I stopped by to read it.:-)
This is very good advice. I myself, talk too much and have never been in this position( unless you include Raquel Welch )So I cannot tell you about that, but I do know that you must tell your loved ones how you feel. You are not promised another minute, so thke advantage of the time you have! Thanks for this, it is wonderful. Anthony
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