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A Land Called Evermore
by David Pekrul
copyright 03-26-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

  A Land Called Evermore
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On the other side of Yesterday,
Is a land called Evermore,
A land where all your fantasies come true.
A land where you can be yourself, and maybe even more,
A land where all things old become as new.

Where you can be a buccaneer
And ride upon the sea,
Or maybe you just want to roam around,
And find adventure where it is or where it ought to be,
This land will pick you up when you are down.

It isn't hard to travel there,
Just close your eyes and dream,
And worries of the day will melt away,
And as the mist is lifted, there arises Evermore,
A place where you will ever want to stay.

But time is short in Evermore,
And you can't stay there long,
For all around the edge is Yesterday,
Just wanting your attention and demanding all your time,
And trying to hold your Evermore at bay.

Now any time life gets you down,
And you are feeling low,
And wishing to be on some distant shore,
Just close your eyes and drift away, and soon the mist will clear,
And once again you'll be in Evermore.


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01-22-2008 Everett (dale) Pogue    

David: For sure it is nice to visit Evermore. Where was today in the poem? I enjoyed the visions painted. If "you" and "your" could be reduced I think it would read better. Dale
05-16-2006 BJ Niktabe    

This is really good. It conjures up visions of places in my dreams, of happy times in a place you would never want to return from. Thanks :)
B.J.
05-03-2006 Nancy Pawley    

I close my eyes and find that it's a dark passage to Evermore...Life is the adventure that we make of it. Good write, David.
Nancy
05-01-2006 Brian Dickenson    

I can see what you mean, and it's pretty good.
However, I do find it rather sad.
It brings back memories of those I knew who could never take that first step on the road to adventure. I decided in my youth that life was for living, not dreaming about distant places and daring deeds. I suppose we all can't be the same, and of course in life there is always a price one has to pay.
But I did have fun.
Brian.
04-09-2005 Lyle Berry    

A wonderful poem and fantasy, David. You have captured the magic with your words...excellent write.
Thanks for sharing!
Warm Regards,
Lyle
03-27-2005 Doreen Reynolds    

Today gets in the way as well as Yesterday. I wonder do we as people who write poetry spend a lot of time in this fanciful land. Great write.

Doreen
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