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Erased.
by Caitlin M. (Age: 16)
copyright 03-27-2005


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I'm all alone. The phone won't ring.
It hasn't rang ever since.
Erasing you away,
erasing you away,
erasing you away from me.

I'm now so empty inside.
I wanna cry, I just might die.
Your not coming back.
You almost did,
but I just had to give you a smack.
Erasing you away,
erasing you away,
erasing you away from me.

You made me bad,
destroyed my head.
Mikey,
Mikey,
I'm sorry,
it has to be this way.
ERASING YOU AWAY!!

I'm erasing you away..........














Wait, what am I erasing?
Wow I really need to get some air.


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06-03-2005 Leah Garrison    

i like this poem. deeply serious painful whimsey. it appeals to me.
however, you have some grammatical errors that trip me up when i read it.
line 2 - "hasn't rung"
line 8 - "You're"

other than that, it's a spectacular little write.

=^.^=


04-04-2005 Jenna T.    

Lots of emotion in this poem. I feel like erasing people from my life all the time.

Jenna T.


03-28-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

Try as you may, only time will ease the pain of loss. We suffer a lot of times because we can't let go and then there is the victory that comes from waiting. Every once in a while love can be rekindled after some time alone! Good write, Anthony


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