Special person/someone who you never met.
by
Duangchai Sut-un
(Age: 32)
copyright 04-16-2005
Age Rating: 13 to 127
That special person.
Can he/she be someone who you never met?
Have you ever dreamed...
about somebody in your destination?
Somebody from the destiny.
Have you ever felt...
every touch without every memory?
Will you believe...
that you can love somebody
even know you've never seen each other?
Will you believe...
that you can be faithful for somebody
who you never met?
You're always waiting because you know...
that person is the true love...
in your life.
That person is somebody
who you always crave...day and night.
You ignored many people around you.
Some who boring,
some who mean nothing.
Neither you nor their fault,
but they're just not
somebody to whom you belong.
If you have had a dream...
let the dream lead your way.
Follow your heart,
don't scare before you ever start,
allow your beloved soul...
blow away your fear.
Needless to say...
soonest you will meet somebody
who will be the perfect part of your life,
who will wipe away...
all of your loneliness tear.
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Agree with the others. It is difficult to bring medody and rhyhm to the work when it's not one's native language, which I understand may be the case here. Keep it up!
This poem is very good in both concept and form. The fact that it has some minor problems with English syntax is almost irrelevant to what you are saying here. As your English gets better, you can always come back and correct things. You will eventually learn grammer usuage and you already know how to express yourself well so I can only say keep on reading and keep on writing.
Although English is not your first language, the language of the heart is universal. I am glad you wrote your feelings down and shared them with us. It is true, you never know who your perfect parter could be...and it would be a sad thing indeed if we were to pass him/her by. I hope to read more from you soon. (Please email me when you do so I don't miss it.) :-)
My impression is that the author has a 'fantasy' person in their thoughts and is waiting for that person to materialize. It is good to wait for that special person, as long as when you meet them, you do not expect them to meet all the conditions and perceptions you had about your 'fantasy' friend. Life is not like that.