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I Thank You
by
Jane L.
(Age: 14)
copyright 04-01-2005
Age Rating: 7 to 127
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That little dream,
How do I look now?
You who looked at me like a child,
Now look at the blue sky.
Even though we are far apart we can still do it.
Someday to you, I will give a bright round moon.
I’ll wait for you,
But don’t come too late for me.
One who gave me hope...
Day by Day,
Those who used their strength.
All those spilled tears...
They can be buried in time.
My dreams won’t stop.
I’ll gather all the times,
That I was with you.
More and more,
I’ll try hard to be with you.
Now I’ll open up my closed heart.
I thank you,
For showing me the world.
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10-21-2007 Samantha P.
wow this was amazing
since you entered it in my contest i have read it multiple times and it definiatly captured my interest.
Growing that has created adventure and longing is simply amazing
i didnt see any erors
and it looks like you dotn have any competition
so you might jsut win that contest
Good luck
and i loved your poem
Samantha
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02-01-2007 Leigh G.
What a great poem! It flows wonderfully, and you tell a story with each line! Your choice of words and from are top notch, and your picture really ascents the poem! In fact, this picky old critic only has one pick: please capitalize the first line. Deja vu, how many times have you heard me say that? Onward! Great work on this one, I can't relate to it very much but I can relate to the pains being buried in time. When it comes to somethings, they only thing that eases the pain is time. This is a great piece! And, you only got one complaint out of me! You're dealing with one nasty citric, so that's darn good! Great work, keep writing!
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders
P.S. You know how it always says "(age limit) to 127" on the age rating? You think any PnP members are 127? If they are, they're farting out dust! Erm, that's a bit rude, eh? I hope no 130-year-old come to PnP, they might not be able to read anything. ;)
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12-05-2005 Haley R.
WOW! I LOVE this one! It's very pretty and it flows well. GREAT JOB!!!!
Claps For Jane!!!
Keep up the great work!
None Other Than,
~*$HALEY$*~
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10-26-2005 Euna P.
WOW WOW WOW AND WOW AGAIN. You express your opinions really well, and you're picture goes along with it very well too!!
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06-25-2005 Paul Kangas
Hey,
This was another great poem. Once again I must say that you have an amazing talent. I hope you go very far and become a professional poet when you grow up!
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04-24-2005 Mika L.
Great Job! I wanna write like u! WAHH!!
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04-10-2005 Tori Lang
As Jenna so brillantly put it WOW.
i feel honoured in being amongst such beautiful minds as your own
And for the age of eleven there is no doubt we can look forward to watching you grow as a poet.
Keep up you wonderful work Jane.
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04-03-2005 Jenna T.
I can only describe this work in one word: WOW! Beautifully written, as are all of your poems and works, Jane. Excellent job.
Jenna T.
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