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The Old Man
by Sage B.
copyright 04-01-2005


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
He sits in the Rack n shack
Staring out
Just looking through the glass at me
I scribble poems and stare back

In my mind he thunks of what he did
Why he lost her
Why he drinks away harsh memories
A tear leaks out of his close eyelid

The one memory unsuppressed
though it was drunk down and pushed away
His hand now holds his forehead
His emotion is no longer repressed


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04-11-2005 Brian Dickenson    



It shows that poems don't have to be long to be good. This contains all the feelings of the lost and the lonely.
Well done.
Brian


04-06-2005 Justin Mccormick    

Nice. Short and sweet. Good poem, and I loved the visual I got.


04-01-2005 Toni Sweeney    

great poem. I found one mistake. thunks should be thinks. Rather then that awesome job.
Toni S.


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