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Scary. It was rally dark. It was gruesome too but th more details, the better it will be. I'm not really a dark writer but this was really good. Keep it up.
This seems more like a night-terror than a nightmare. I hope this is only a poem and not what you are experiencing. The flow in the poem is great, except when you get to the last stanza. Line two of that stanza seems long and awkward, but I'm sure you can come up with a solution. Other than that it is well-written. A little too dark for my liking, but, hey, that is only me; it is still a great poem.