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Dreaming of you
by Brian Dickenson (Age: 73)
copyright 05-26-2005


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
Sinking slowly into the liquid
Warmth of your eyes I am drowning.
Enveloped in your gentle caress
My soul is soaring.

If this love I feel lasts but a moment,
It lasts forever.
When asked have I felt this way before;
I answer; never.

My heart pounds in my breast,
Near exploding.
Blood pulses in my brain,
Over-loading.

My veins run with fluid fire
When we touch.
My mind starbursts when we kiss.
I love you so much.

Our bodies intertwine,
I'm melting.
I awake alone.
Regretting.




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04-06-2007 Frank Fields    

From a writer who perhaps too often allows his heart to rule everything else in his life, all I can really say is, "I wish I had written that." Or written it in that way. Or caused the evocation of feelings that you bring out. Thanks for bringing this "out of the closet," as it were.

William :)
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10-10-2005 Amanda Guthrie    

My Gosh Brian,
The feelings you must have! My husband has written me some beautiful pieces but nothing that classic/ steamy all at the same time. I hope your putting this all in a book, it will make you flush and sob all at the same time.
10-10-2005 Regina Pate    

my mom said I am getting sick as I read this out loud, but I think this is beautiful, I wish I could write as well as you, but thank you for your words I am learning so much from them and all of you at PnP Great write, good job, thank you

Gina
09-04-2005 Anna Tkachenko    

It is sounds so familiar, like i had read(or feel it) it before, but i am sure it is first. Thank you for your great poem it is deserves 5 points.
05-26-2005 Duangchai Sut-un    

You made your words dance on the page. I could feel every words in your poem. THANK YOU TO WROTE THE GOOD POEM FOR US TO READ.
Heart.
05-06-2005 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

I don't read every poem again and again... but this one I do. And every time I do... I feel more of it. More pull, more passion and yet so simply stated. Just wanted to thank you again for posting it.
05-05-2005 David Pekrul    

This is a winner; a very fine write, simple yet expressive; good use of words.
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