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Me and You
by Anthony Lane Stahlhut (Age: 47)
copyright 04-12-2005
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  Me and You
Picture Credits: By Candy Clontz

Its been a while
since I've seen your smile,
but there is still hope to see.
What once was true
about me and you
I wish that it still could be.

I had seen you there
you looked so fair,
but how was I to know.
That time would change
and then rearrange
your feelings and make you go.

Now I hope to find
what we left behind
so that together we could be.
How could it be through
I thought me and you
were fulfilling our destiny.

When love is lost
you pay the cost
put your feelings behind a wall.
You've got to move on
get over what's gone
You can't be afraid to fall.

So dance the dance
take the chance
You have got to try some more.
What you've got to do
is stay true to you
it won't be the same as before.

Now I have to find
some peace of mind
and try to get back to the game.
I don't know why,
but I must try
some how to remain the same.


Its been a while
since I saw your smile,
but there is still hope to see.
What once was true
about me and you
I wish that it still could be.


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01-10-2008 Cassie S.    

This was a really sweet poem I liked it! It's hard getting over someone but it's good to remember the good times and not totally forget about them. It's never fun being in a bad breakup. Well good write!
Just a fellow poet,
~Cassie JSG~
05-02-2005 Duangchai Sut-un    

When love is lost, but all memorized still here,
deeply in a lonely heart
and try to move toward all the fear.
Just want you to know that this poem had stole my tear.
04-14-2005 James Shammas    

I sense a foward thrusting tempo to the poem which, to me, perhaps suggests the speaker's desire to express his frustration and/or move on. Good work.

Jim
04-14-2005 Emily Garwood    

Perfect like always anthony. a lovely poem with hidden messageas and dreams of what could have been and what most the time we want to be!
Despite the sadness it still sounds like a pair if you know what I mean because you still say me and you. Creating that we're one effect despite being apart....hmm well i understand what i mean :)
The only mistake i see is on the 5th verse down you wrote
'You've have got to try some more'
you don't need the have since you've written 'you've' most probably a typo.
Good work though.
Emy
04-13-2005 David Pekrul    

It certainly does take time to get over a lost love; so many emotions, questions (what if, maybe, my fault?, could have tried harder?) But then love returns, it always does, maybe not with the same person, but next time maybe even better. Who know what, or should I say, who God has for us.

Well expressed write.
04-13-2005 Tori Lang    

A poem which sounds as if it had sadness written within its lines when you wrote it.
(should 'sense' be 'since'?)
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