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by silvermoon
copyright 04-16-2005

Age Rating: 1 +

I've checked the ground
I've checked the grass
I've checked my flowers
All lessons in class
I've checked the wind
The fresh smell of the air
I have done all this
And still do I care
I checked my love
Have seen all friendships
I can go on with checking forever
You might say I've seen alot from here
Actually while doing all this checking
At the same time I've checked my life..

..It's great =)

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        01-09-2009     Frank Fields        

Just thought I'd mention, the title which linked back here appeared on my My Yahoo! page as a result of the RSS feed. Some other stuff from here, too, but your work was right up there and noticeable. ^^

Frank :)

        01-09-2009     Frank Fields        

Any work that makes me smile as I remember, and allows me to keep smiling afterwards, is well worth a big smile with, "Thanks!" in return. It is so refreshing to read a work as charming as yours. Sometimes I feel like I'm being bombarded by 16-pounders from Morgan's fleet and then boarded, to boot. Even my own work does that to me sometimes.

This one is just charming, but perhaps not as simple as it would seem. Multi-layered and leveled to allow the reader to take what they will. I prefer to fill my cup with your offering of smiles. ^_^

Thank you for starting my day off right!

Frank :)

        08-13-2006     Tammy Frascona        

I think this poem shows your analytical side. I tend to analyze my life as well and come to the same realization that my life really isn't all that bad. Thank You for the reminder and such a good poem!

        06-20-2005     Brian Dickenson        

This is so happy and upbeat that i found myself smiling as I read it.
Check it out, check everything out, then act.
The old adage, life is what you make it, is still true.
Be who you want to be, not what others want.
Very well done. Thank you for making me grin like an idiot, Brian

        06-15-2005     Anthony Lane Stahlhut        

It was good before and it's still great.
You checked your life before it was to late.
You found the things that you need,
we all know you will succeed.

I came to read this again and it was more fun to read this, this time! Thanks, Anthony

        04-17-2005     Anthony Lane Stahlhut        

The best part is where you realize that a great life also has proublems. Great write and I am Glad to see youh here again. Thanks, Anthony

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