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05-11-2009
Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
Wow, anywhere from a 1 star to a 5 star for this poem. Well, thanks Lauren, for bringing up my overall rating on this by giving me five stars. LOL. And no, poems don't have to rhyme... mine just usually do. It's hard for me NOT to rhyme... making this one especially difficult. You know? But I'm glad you enjoyed... and you've been a busy bee reading all my stuff! LOL. Thank you very much!
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05-09-2009
Lauren Turner
Never mind if it rhymes or not.
Free verse is a BEAUTIFUL thing, and you have great talent for it, Ms. Mary. It gave me a feeling of just wishing to go back to a time where you thought you had it all...but you know that you can't.
You have SO much talent...please keep writing!
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05-16-2005
Crystal (bunny) Johnson
well well, this is a sad but good poem. we all go different ways, and some how we end up meeting where we first met.this poem was really good.
mia
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04-22-2005
David Pekrul
I love laying in bed at night and just day-dreaming. This is a good write. No one said a poem has to rhyme. I write mostly rhyming poems, but the ones that have given me the greatest satisfaction are the ones that don't rhyme.
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