08-03-2010
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
Ah, I'm very sorry about the duplicated post! I must've hit the submit button a second time, it's showing up twice...
Sorry about that!
~Leigh of the Commenting Community
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08-03-2010
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
This was very nice! The land you described sounded quite utopian. To some degree, it could be considered a land of fantasy considering its differences to the world as it is nowadays. Great work on this one!
~Leigh of the Commenting Community
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08-03-2010
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
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11-24-2005
Ernest Lozon
Nice poem about a very nice place. I could name a few places that this poem could actually be related to but you did a great job putting this piece together in honor of your country. Good flow throughout and very easy to follow and understand. I enjoyed the read a lot and keep up the good writing.
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05-16-2005
usprincess123
Great poem! However I think you made a mistake at the line "Where woman is independant". Overall, it is really good! Write on!
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05-13-2005
Jenna Tramonti
Wow! This is good! Great job, hope to see even more like this from you!
Jenna T.
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