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Come With Me
by Jennifer Campbell-Kletzli (Age: 20)
copyright 05-11-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Come with me
to a place
where stars are born

Come with me
to find true love
in a place of immortality

Come with me
to the land of the free
a home for the brave

Let me show you
where honesty is born
and security is at its highest

Let me show you
where man can work hard
and get paid well for it

Let me show you
where woman is independent
and can roam about all day

Come with me
Let me show you
a country full of opportunity

Come with me
let me show you
where the people rule the lands

Come with me
let me show you
a place with a glorious history


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11-24-2005 Ernest Lozon    

Nice poem about a very nice place. I could name a few places that this poem could actually be related to but you did a great job putting this piece together in honor of your country. Good flow throughout and very easy to follow and understand. I enjoyed the read a lot and keep up the good writing.
05-16-2005 Tina Z.    

Great poem! However I think you made a mistake at the line "Where woman is independant". Overall, it is really good! Write on!
05-13-2005 Jenna T.    

Wow! This is good! Great job, hope to see even more like this from you!

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