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Come With Me

by Jennifer Campbell-Kletzli (Age: 30)
copyright 04-22-2005

Age Rating: 10 +

Come with me
to a place
where stars are born

Come with me
to find true love
in a place of immortality

Come with me
to the land of the free
a home for the brave

Let me show you
where honesty is born
and security is at its highest

Let me show you
where man can work hard
and get paid well for it

Let me show you
where woman is independent
and can roam about all day

Come with me
Let me show you
a country full of opportunity

Come with me
let me show you
where the people rule the lands

Come with me
let me show you
a place with a glorious history

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        08-03-2010     Leigh Gilholm Fisher        

Ah, I'm very sorry about the duplicated post! I must've hit the submit button a second time, it's showing up twice...

Sorry about that!

~Leigh of the Commenting Community

        08-03-2010     Leigh Gilholm Fisher        

This was very nice! The land you described sounded quite utopian. To some degree, it could be considered a land of fantasy considering its differences to the world as it is nowadays. Great work on this one!

~Leigh of the Commenting Community

        08-03-2010     Leigh Gilholm Fisher        

        11-24-2005     Ernest Lozon        

Nice poem about a very nice place. I could name a few places that this poem could actually be related to but you did a great job putting this piece together in honor of your country. Good flow throughout and very easy to follow and understand. I enjoyed the read a lot and keep up the good writing.

        05-16-2005     usprincess123        

Great poem! However I think you made a mistake at the line "Where woman is independant". Overall, it is really good! Write on!

        05-13-2005     chibimars        

Wow! This is good! Great job, hope to see even more like this from you!

Jenna T.

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