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Miss You.
by Cortney Jaruzel (Age: 18)
copyright 09-20-2007


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
I miss you more then you'll ever know.
I'm sorry I messed up.
I'm sorry It's over.
Just one thing left to say,
I miss you more then you'll ever know.


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09-29-2007 Frank Fields    

This really does need developing a little bit more. The kernel of a good idea is there and well-presented, but you haven't provided the nurturing jacket which would allow it to expand into a flowering plant.

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09-23-2007 Leah G.    

I like the idea of this poem, but i think you could add more. This poem could be so much more expressive and detailed if you added more. I love the message, and how you repeat it at the end. This poem was short and to the point, but you could make this longer and better. Keep on writing!

Leah
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