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Fake tears
by Sage B.
copyright 05-03-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
It just makes me mad
Makes me see your selfishness
you believe that being depressed is the new fad
I admit your life won't be exactly flawless

You cry over the simplest of things
Whle a 8 year old is orphaned
Taking care of 3 other siblings
She stays strong never to complain about being burdened

Or when a man gives up food
just for his childs diabetes medicine
He actually has a life thats valued
And he will suffer through endless famine

You say your so Depressed
I say your one sad soul
Who is blind to the millions oppressed
And shall never be truly sad untill they have lived in the hellhole,
Just like they have


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05-04-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

I just hate whiners, they cry about things they don't even know anything about. This is a good poem. Thanks, Anthony
05-03-2005 David Pekrul    

When one feels sorry for themselves, they in turn lock out the world, not seeing the beauty, nor seeing those who are worse off than them. Self-pity is actually Selfishness. You have expressed your thoughts well, of which I agree.
05-03-2005 Debra Rose    

You know...I so can agree with this. People who are depressed for no reason are idiots. You should try listening to ICP sometime...it says the same things that this does. Except, they ahve this belief, that everyone will see it at some point, and you get back everything you give. Kind of gives you a satisfaction to know people who you're talking about will one day have a reason to be so depressed, and realize how stupid they are.

Sad thing is, I used to be one of those whiny little kids >.<

Great job, Sage
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