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Ha ha! I love this I think it's funny that you wrote a poem about a snowman. I don't know maybe it's because I just read one about death. ha ha but I remember all the snowmen we used to make! That was so much fun! Daddy was always too lazy to help us so we'd roll the huge balls of snow all over the yard and they wouldn't be white like you see in pictures and movies. They'd be filthy with mud and leaves and so much more but they'd be HUGE. It always took all of us just to lift it's head on top! And that's even with daddy helping. I miss those times it was so fun. We'd freeze our little butts off. ha ha thanks for posting it.
~Cassie~
Toni, I think you stumbled onto something very somber here! This is a great metaphor for death and the hope for an after-life. You may not see it this way, but this is what I see. You see, we all have to face the fact that we will some day leave this wonderful place. We will melt away, like the snowman, but the winter will come again and other snowmen will be made by eager children. So, you see, you have stumbled onto a very interesting and lovely poem. There is another side to this poem as well. If not interpreted the way I have, it can be also interpreted as a wonderful children’s story. It has the gentle flow and subtle imagery of a melting snowman and cheerful children pouting next to it! “he had and scarf and gloves,” in this line, I think you meant, “he had a scarf…” I would take out the last stanza. You have stated that already and you don’t want to lose its effectiveness. Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece of poetry!
although this is the first poem i have read of yours i would say we write the same. We do not have snow here very often here in Texas and i don't think i have ever made a snow man but your have made me one and took him away all in one season of your work and now i think have a caught a glimpse of what it must be really like to have a loose this man of snow! thank you
Very nice. I hate seeing snowmen melt in my front yard because it's kind of pathetic because they'd only been around for a short time and also because I took a lot of time making it. LOL!
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