    10-18-2006 Tammy Frascona
What a vision... You have painted a perfect picture with words how Fall is to a lot of people. So many memories and images came flooding back to me when I read this. It makes me smile in it simplicity and beauty. I loved it Brian!
Tammy F.
*** Of The Commenting Crusaders ***
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    10-17-2006 BJ Niktabe
Mmmmmm... this makes me want to curl up in front of the fire. With a steaming mug of hot cocoa, mini marshmallows floating on the top, and a small down blanket to keep my legs warm. The only other thing I would need is my kitties by my side! I like this one!
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   10-14-2006 Deborah Thomas
Ah yes! The morning mists.. and old friends meeting.. finally cool enough to be hanging out at the fence-line with the neighbors.
Lovely thoughts.. Timing is perfect!
Debbie
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   08-16-2006 Richard Reed Jr
Autumn scene portraits painted most vividly.
Portraits of John Constable using words of good rhyme and rhythm.
Leaves good images in my mind.
Thanks,
Rich
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08-16-2006 Brian Dickenson
Hi Debra, climes is an old English word meaning region, country or climate.
Brian
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08-14-2006 Debra Rose
To warmer climes
^ is climes a word? Sorry...v.v;;; lol
Once I figure that out, I'll give you praise! Don't wanna shirk you for my own ignorance ^.^
This is a great work. Reminds me of a less severe ee cummings in an odd sort of way. You always had a talent with imagery and a strange sort of rythm that always worked together.
Great work
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   05-27-2005 Angela Toshner
this is a really good poem. I couldnt believe how many you have written in this month. O could never do that. Only a true writer can
great write
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   05-07-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut
I like Autumn. The trees are so beautiful with all the colors. The cold comming only means you must put another log on the fire and its time to cuddle with your loved one! Thanks, Anthony
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    05-07-2005 David Pekrul
Although I think this is a great poem, I've got to tell you, I really don't like the autumn time of year. It means winter is on the way and winter is cccccold. Remember, I live in Canada, and it doesn't get much colder than that.
Love your work,
David Pekrul
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