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Blessed
by David Pekrul
copyright 05-09-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
My First attempt at writing a Haiku

I loved her in spring,
And she blessed me with children,
Now my life is full.


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07-05-2005 Debra Rose    

Awww....that's very sweet David. Is this your first haiku as Anthony said? It seems too good to be a first attempt
05-09-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

This is a very good first attempt.
05-09-2005 James Shammas    

Haiku is so wonderful and contagious when done well. I envision both the writer and the reader putting their souls and depth into each word, since the piece, by defined criteria, has a set format with limited words.
Here, for example, the word "Spring" must have significance and must be chosen for its relation to the other words in the poem. Using that word, I see, here, the subject's love as a beginning, the herald of an entire life getting started and bringing forth wonferful fruit, as the poem closes with the nostalgia of a a life coming to an end, or more appropriately, full circle.
Nice write! David's got the Haiku bug!!

Jim
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