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WOW! I thought I knew a few words. My electronic dictionary blew its fuse.
I had to find my old 'Consise Oxford', to carry on.
Very cleverly done.
It's back to my Oxford for me.
Brian.
Very clever. I recently read a book where I found 100 new words. I had to sit with a dictionary. I bet you got some of those words from one.
I enjoyed it.
Very clever mary! im proud of you! I am yet to attempt my version of this type of poem. so wish me luck, I am lucky to be amngst great writers for inspiration
Come on now guys... this is the age old "lost love" theme. I loved, he toyed with my emotions, I'm left a wreck... yada, yada, yada. :-) AND ... I DID IT!!!! :-P
Do you know how HARD this was? And parts of it almost even rhyme! I think Anthony will still win... but at least I had a decent entry, right? :-D
And what words did you have trouble with? Here's a summary...
A sudden break that left me with
A heart cut to peices and dissected
Forever separated from my dream
Kept from my happiness it seems
Exhausted and ruined against my will
Just a legacy of an unprincipled fellow
No longer naive/innocent, it was a
Deceiving/dishonest theft of my emotions
I refused to listen to the voices of reason
Ignoring the inner warnings about him
Left me with a coffin-like heart,
full of holes...a coffin despoiled/destroyed
Leaving it open, accessible, and vulnerable
to the undermining worm of a man
who completely destroyed me
Pesky insect! His memory feeds
upon the dry rot that's left behind
like a disease (yaws) causing ulcers
and destruction bone deep!
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