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The Confrontation
by Jean George
copyright 05-27-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
It stood there, wild-eyed and unkempt, staring at me with such malevolence, that I unconsciously retreated a step as if that could save me. As we stood there watching each other with unblinking intensity, I found my thoughts chasing around in my head in dismayed confusion. What was I doing here? Why was this happening to me?

The murky light kept it partially obscured in shadow, but again I took a shuffling step backward, still trying to escape from the inevitable. At that same instant, the creature moved also, mimicking me, almost as if it sensed my desire to escape and wanted me to think it possible. Mesmerized, I stood staring back at the gloom-shrouded image lurking there, relentless in its quest to outwait me. Quickly I devised one plan, then another, wondering if I moved quickly enough, could I make it back into the refuge of the room behind me and bolt the door…and then what…hide under the bed? How original, as if no one and nothing would think to look there.

Unobtrusively, I glanced to the end of the hallway, checking for others, whether for help or as witnesses, I didn’t know. From the corner of my eye, I saw it crouch and shift it’s head slightly. In that heartbeat, my mind made up, I leapt wildly backward, slammed the door and leaned into it, my heart fluttering insanely. The bed and its covers drew my attention and I longed for nothing more than to climb up and hide myself in its imagined safety and warmth.

Still leaning against the door, I listened intently, waiting, willing myself to hear any movement from the hallway, my mind randomly seeking some small source of comfort. Moments passed as I weighed my options, unwillingly becoming more alert with each second. Finally, I gave it up and opened the door…the thought of my morning coffee drawing me on and with a disgruntled glare at the huge old Victorian mirror outside my door, I stumbled on towards the kitchen, once again vowing to have someone, anyone, move the damn mirror someplace else. It was bad enough having to get up at this god-forsaken hour every morning without having to confront myself in that stupid mirror every time I opened my bedroom door.


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09-30-2006 Deborah Thomas    

I love it! I will not look for the 'hidden meaning'(wink) I enjoyed the fun of it all the way trough! I love a mystery as well... wondering if perhaps a cat would pounce!
But the line I relate most to is the 'imagined' safety and warmth of the bed. As if hiding under the covers ever protected us from the 'boogie man'.
Loved the sarcastic annoyance of the mirror..! LOL Debbie


12-23-2005 Roger Crique    

I go through this drama every once in a while. I don't like to see myself in the mirror anymore. Too many thoughts pass by my befuddled mind. I used to like my reflection but not anymore. I was really on the edge of my seat when I was reading this. The only part that I find a bit awkward is the leaping back. I think it's the word, "leaping." I find it hard to do. I tried to visulalize someone leaping backwards and it's a bit hard to do. But I must say that this was an intense and chilling read. At one point or another, we must confront ourselves and for the most part, we've messed up so much that we are usually never in agreement with our reflection! Great write!


12-02-2005 Leeann Monat    

I don't think I told you when you read this to me how much I absolutely loved it. I did not expect the story to turn around like that at the end, but your brain pulled it together. One could only hope to be as talented a writer as you. Nicely done...pip pip...good show...ta ta...


06-06-2005 James Shammas    

I love the way you handle a not uncommon subject of contemplating one's image and one's sense of self. You do it with originality, the way the language slowly conveys the realization of this person's discomfort in small increments or epiphanies that ultimately convey his realization that he MUST confront that which he avoids. I also like how you show him avoiding HIS responsibility in doing this, by wishing someone else to move the damn mirror. This exemplifies such a common human weakness that we all can relate to. I'll be curious to see how it evolves.

Jim


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