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The Love I Waited
by Kristy Ahn (Age: 19)
copyright 05-31-2005


Age Rating: 13 to 127

  The Love I Waited
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The green of spring surrounds the Earth.
An invitation leads me to a church
Where it brings back old blissful and sorrowful memories.
I imperceptibly step down the staircases turning a corner,
And suddenly this slowly clouds my vision.

The soul I longed to see
The soul I waited for many years
The soul I kept in my memory
Stood across the Great Hall facing a crowd.
I stand in a pale expression but with a happy heart
Hearing nothing but the beating of my heart,
Seeing nothing but this soul,
And feeling nothing but my lungs being suppressed.
I was frozen.
I was a sculptured statue of ice.

His shadow finally shifts from its place facing me.
My clouded eyes meet his from a distance.
In his eyes, lays a strange sparkle.
Just as when those sparkles seemed to be juddering,
He was coldly turning away.
As he turns, his shadow throws a dagger across my heart,
Shattering me into a shimmering million pieces.

Without being able to move a single step closer,
A sparkle flows down upon my rosy cheeks.
Speechless, I leave without seeking the reason of his gestures.


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08-22-2005 Jackie Edwards    

This is beautiful, and a wonderful read.
06-23-2005 Paul Kangas    

Awww, this is such a sweet poem :)

There is no other better feeling in this world then to find love, and when you do, go for it! Take risks and I wish you all the best.

Good job!
06-10-2005 Brittney N. N.    

Wow. Very intense. Keep it up. And that pic so matches the way I imagined you looking like at the end.
06-01-2005 Shannon W.    

wow! that was a very good write! i liked it! it's very sweet i really liked the pic.!!!!! keep up the good work. your doing great!
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