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Elisabeth Hatheway
This poem is nice.It shows appreciation for both the sun and moon and comments on how they both are helpful to us.
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11-13-2005
Anthony Lane Stahlhut
This is a really good poem, even reading it again and again. Thanks for your vision.
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06-23-2005
Paul Kangas
Wow, this poem must have taken a lot of effort and thought to write. This is an amazing poem. I honestly don't know if I could write something as good as this, lol. Keep up the great work!
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06-19-2005
Brian Dickenson
Not the easiest form to write in, but you do it well.
Keep it up.
Brian.
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06-18-2005
Jean George
A very good effort with this poem. You get extra credit for the ABAB rhyme scheme (it's harder to do). The back and forth analogy of the sun and moon and how different yet alike they are is interesting...well done.
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05-28-2005
Mika Lee
Good poem! I dont know what a sonnet is. lol. =^^=
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05-26-2005
usprincess123
Cool poem!! Welcome to P-n-P!!
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05-26-2005
Anthony Lane Stahlhut
well written. I really enjoyed reading this! Anthony
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