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Two Faces (Sonnet)
by Kristy Ahn (Age: 19)
copyright 05-26-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

  Two Faces (Sonnet)
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Look up the sky in the morning and night.
Can you see the two smiling faces?
The glamorous sun rises and smiles bright.
The sun is chased and the moon replaces.

The sun brightens up the world with it’s light.
As it shines down on Earth, it gives us heat.
And this makes us happy with delight,
However it sometimes scorches our feet.

There is no better lamplight than the moon.
All glitters like diamonds in its existence.
Yet leaves just before sun rise and back at noon.
The cycle then repeats at a distance.

Up the starry sky, side-by-side they gait.
The two faces are a couple by fate.


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11-27-2005 Elisabeth H.    

This poem is nice.It shows appreciation for both the sun and moon and comments on how they both are helpful to us.
11-13-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

This is a really good poem, even reading it again and again. Thanks for your vision.
06-23-2005 Paul Kangas    

Wow, this poem must have taken a lot of effort and thought to write. This is an amazing poem. I honestly don't know if I could write something as good as this, lol. Keep up the great work!
06-19-2005 Brian Dickenson    

Not the easiest form to write in, but you do it well.
Keep it up.
Brian.
06-18-2005 Jean George    

A very good effort with this poem. You get extra credit for the ABAB rhyme scheme (it's harder to do). The back and forth analogy of the sun and moon and how different yet alike they are is interesting...well done.
05-28-2005 Mika L.    

Good poem! I dont know what a sonnet is. lol. =^^=
05-26-2005 Tina Z.    

Cool poem!! Welcome to P-n-P!!
05-26-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

well written. I really enjoyed reading this! Anthony
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