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All Those Fallen Tears
by
Jane L.
(Age: 14)
copyright 05-25-2005
Age Rating: 10 to 127
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After all those fallen tears,
Are you trying to tell me something?
If you're thinking of someone,
Fill your precious heart.
Fully fully with no end to the night lights,
Pray to the far stars in the sky.
Lost in the small timespan,
We can all feel something.
My closed eyes are,
Full of hope and happiness.
And on that I believe and walk.
Lost in the small timespan,
We're all finding love.
Little by little be stronger,
And the let's go to the high sky.
Lost in the small timespan,
We can all feel something.
My closed eyes are,
Full of hope and happiness.
And on that I believe and walk.
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04-30-2007 Leigh G.
Very beautiful! I like how the ending has a brighter theme to contrast the rest of the poem, and the bright ending also gives the poem a more complete feeling of the person coming to a resolve rather than whining about love lives, you know? I like the picture of Kikyo. :) My only grammatical pick is that you should capitalize the stars of each line. And, yes, I'm back to reading your poems. :) This time, I want to finish reading your poems! I got distracted last few times. -.- Back on topic, the choice of words captivated the reader as always. Both you and Euna have a way with words in your poetry. :) Great work, keep writing!
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06-25-2005 Paul Kangas
Your only 11? Wow, this is an incredible poem. Jane, you are so talented! Keep up the great work! I like how some of it was repeated.
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05-27-2005 Mika L.
MYEW! Good poem. I do find the lost in timespan part sorta weird though. It sorta doesn't sound like the kind of phrase to be repeated but its a good poem. Keep writting
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05-26-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut
When everything else has been said, The quest for truth and happiness and hope are all that drive us on! Good write, Anthony
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