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06-19-2005
Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
Yeah right... like you have to worry if you'll win... you win a LOT. But then again... you deserve it! So I'm not whining, I'm not complaining, No I'm really happy for you, And if you believe that... Why, I have a bridge for sale for you! LOL, J/K. I really am happy you've won as often as you have. You are talented, and the contest holders can see (and often acknowldege) it!
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06-01-2005
Sarah Mahler
Very well written. But there is one place where I get hung up on the choice of grammar....
"Which way should, I say that?"
I'm pretty sure that the comma should not be there.
Otherwise, well done. Also, good subject matter.
I think it is sad that people don't enter the contests. (Myself included.)
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05-28-2005
James Shammas
You're right! We should all be entering more contests. Give yout a run for your money. Just kidding!!
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05-28-2005
David Pekrul
Good thoughts, Anthony. I guess it really isn't a contest unless there are at least two entries. I have entered a couple contests, but they were with poems that I had already written. I find it hard to write just in order to enter a contest. As I always say, "I write what I feel" and sometimes I just don't feel for the subject matter of a contest, but I'll keep trying.
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