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by James Shammas (Age: 44)
copyright 05-31-2005


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
He hugs with his soul.
Free arms, unbound, hold the world,
lifting heavy hearts.


Phonebooth glistens wet,
ringing in the stinging rain.
This dark night. Listen.


Sitting on a fence.
The cock crows. A bird whistles.
You fall or jump off.




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10-13-2006 Kimberly Prom    

Not actually a big fan of haiku, however, I am now!! Well, if you are writing it I am. Wonderful write!!
01-11-2006 Richard Reed Jr    

Again, very direct, simple pitcures of life.
Ther is much to like here.

Good Haiku!

Rich
09-01-2005 Regina Pate    

i don't know what a haiku is but i liked it
06-01-2005 Sarah Mahler    

I really like these. Expecially, the second haiku.
I think the second haiku contains a bit more of a theme contained within, than the other two. Plus, it carries a certain something that I can't quite place, that the other two haikus don't have.

Good job.
05-31-2005 Jean George    

The first one is very inspirational and lets the mind settle in gratefully to ponder its soothing message.

The second, however, positively crackles with with imagery that excites the imagination with visions of lonely dark streets often found in film noir to a welcome haven of safety during a storm. This is terrific!

The third is classic senyru (the kind that was written with sarcastic wit about human nature). It can be read a bunch of different ways and applied to many situations....Great job with all three. They are all so wonderfully different.
05-31-2005 Irina Guschina    

Hi!
I gave you 5 stars! but I don't see any star on this page...Strange...
05-31-2005 Irina Guschina    

Dear James! First haiku is so charming....
Two otger are nice too! You are good in writing haiku!
Write more...
Thank you for sharing!
Irina.
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