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It Hurts
by Cortney Jaruzel (Age: 18)
copyright 09-20-2007


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
It hurts,
How we laugh,
How we cry.
It hurts,
How you told me,
That you're already dead inside.

I have a feeling,
That they don't know you like I do.
Me, being pulled in more than one direction,
Life has me confused.

It hurts,
The way we talk,
The way we smile.
It hurts,
How we eventually give up,
After a while.

I'll always remember,
How we cried.
When you told me,
That it hurts inside.


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10-03-2007 Steven C.    

I was reading this and started to work on a comment offline. This peom had alot of feelings inot and emotion. I really got into it and thought it was great. You put alot of heart into this and i'm looking foward to reading more fo your works.
09-29-2007 Frank Fields    

An emotional presentation short on "high-powered" imagery but long on feelings. I haven't yet been able to describe the texture of pain and tears, but you come very close to doing that.
This piece is nicely written and well presented. ^^

Frank :)
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