Admire You
by
Kristy Ahn
(Age: 19)
copyright 06-15-2005
Age Rating: 10 to 127
This person is someone who glows in my heart.
Someone who has filled my life with love.
She is someone you can trust as a friend.
Her beauty with her kindness makes her seem
Like an angel, an angel that is gentle.
Her voice is like a nightingale.
The sweet voice melts in my heart.
But watch out! Her gentle nature might burst
Into flames of a Phoenix, if you touch her wrong side.
The smell of her fragrance is like summer flowers,
That it makes you believe you are in a vast garden.
Here is who impresses me, my mother.
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AWW! This is so cute! I wish I was your mommy...or umm the reciever of this beautiful poem. You should give this to her on her birthday or mother's day. But a day when she's down would be perfect.
As I read I was wondering who it was. I thought it was very good and quite suspenseful all the way to the conclusion. As I read though, I had a feeling that it would be a family member, most likely mom. Keep up the awesome work!
This poems says a lot for your Mother and a lot for you. I pray you always have a good relationship like this. It is the strength that you need when life gets tough.