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Rain

by David Pekrul
copyright 06-07-2005


Age Rating: 10 +

Rain like a curtain,
Turns dry ground into liquid,
The earth is renewed.




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        06-08-2005     James Shammas        

I may be looking into this too much, but I like the word 'curtain', and assume it was chosen carefully, as every word in a haiku is necessarily loaded. For me, I see the curtain of rain as an ending to the day's drama, the earth renewed in the sense of a new drama or story beginning the next day, in addition to renewal by water.

Jim

        06-08-2005     Roger Crique        

In such a short poem, the mystery and dynamics of our Earth is enclosed. I could smell the Earth, as I read this little precious gem!



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